Task 1: A vast improvement from the initial paragraph uploaded. Comprehensive analysis of each technique and principle required from the brief is shown throughout, and detailed illustrated examples have been used. However, more elucidated links needed to be made to demonstrate a cohesive understanding. Merit.
Task 2: Evidence of post-production is simplified and basic. Not all elements of post-production have been evidenced, and therefore the portfolio is lacking. The vlog is lacking imagination, and there is no clear attempt to use edits creatively. However, the final video is successful in that it is a complete product. Pass.
Overall, there are aspects of the work where you have demonstrated your ability successfully. However, you could have achieved a much higher overall grade by meeting initial deadlines, allowing time for full redrafts and giving yourself time to complete tasks properly.
Final grade for Unit 16 = Pass
ReplyDeleteTask 1: A vast improvement from the initial paragraph uploaded. Comprehensive analysis of each technique and principle required from the brief is shown throughout, and detailed illustrated examples have been used. However, more elucidated links needed to be made to demonstrate a cohesive understanding. Merit.
Task 2: Evidence of post-production is simplified and basic. Not all elements of post-production have been evidenced, and therefore the portfolio is lacking. The vlog is lacking imagination, and there is no clear attempt to use edits creatively. However, the final video is successful in that it is a complete product. Pass.
Overall, there are aspects of the work where you have demonstrated your ability successfully. However, you could have achieved a much higher overall grade by meeting initial deadlines, allowing time for full redrafts and giving yourself time to complete tasks properly.
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